Solaris OSRS | RSPS| Trailer | Need YOUR feedback!

[Fiber Optic]

Hey guys, this is the first video i've made with Sony Vegas. I know there is mistakes & other odds and ends that need to be worked out. But overall, let me know how I did & where i can improve. (zoom & pan is quite difficult to get @ first on Sony vegas but ill eventually get it)

Make sure to watch in 1080p and leave me feedback please! thanks

 

[LandScape]

the music doesn't fit at all for a "Trailer"