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w000t

w000t

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w000t said:
I agree But when i lower it it looks worse than with the contrast.

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Its a shame the text on this one covers the jeans on this one.
They seem to draw attention in the first picture and i like it :love:
 
You should have used the text to compliment the flow, not to fuck it over. The render is over-sharpened. The smudging on the bottom looks sloppy. It's a pretty cool tag overall, though.
 
i honestly think this picture in whole is amazing!
the only problem i have is the blur at bottom of jeans is bit well... not to blurred in with the jeans
i will show what i mean :)

(i dont mean to offend you, im just trying to help)

smudgerjr1.png


and maybe change it to something similiar to this :)

smudgerjrr2.png


but yeah as i said ..
other then that it is perfect for my likings <3
i realy love all your work :)
 
pwninjason said:
i honestly think this picture in whole is amazing!
the only problem i have is the blur at bottom of jeans is bit well... not to blurred in with the jeans
i will show what i mean :)

(i dont mean to offend you, im just trying to help)

smudgerjr1.png


and maybe change it to something similiar to this :)

smudgerjrr2.png


but yeah as i said ..
other then that it is perfect for my likings <3
i realy love all your work :)
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Don't worry about seeming like you're offending me. I take all constructive critique to mind. I see what you mean by it and thanks for the CnC.

Thanks :)
 
The flow is pretty definite. But the left side distracts me from the focal completely. Maybe try using different colors as well? What I do if I feel my sig has too much contrast is make a color layer with the color 1b1b1b and set that to lighten on 100%. Changing the opacity can help as well. Oh, and sharpen sharpen sharpen.
 
Colours are great, maybe just a bit too contrasted but it sort of works in your favour I think. Blending and text issues around the chick, and it feels a little empty of effects on the left. Nevertheless, I think you're really getting the hang of smudging :)
 
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