Sing [Feedback Welcome]

[Heaven Above]

Tell me what you think.

 

[XX_PLANKER_xx]

Looks good, but I think you should darken some of the darks on her hood/jacket. I dont really like the gradient on the letters. Is that two fonts? I think it would also look better if it were the length of her hand, to the finger.

If youre using photoshop... try magic wanding the lights and darks onto different layers and play around with highlights and dark lights. They say a great piece will have really bright whites and really dark blacks. So lots of contrast.

Im curious what program youre using.

+Good use of space btw.

...I might be crazy but she kind of looks stretched horizontally.

 

[Heaven Above]

Looks good, but I think you should darken some of the darks on her hood/jacket. I dont really like the gradient on the letters. Is that two fonts? I think it would also look better if it were the length of her hand, to the finger.

If youre using photoshop... try magic wanding the lights and darks onto different layers and play around with highlights and dark lights. They say a great piece will have really bright whites and really dark blacks. So lots of contrast.

Im curious what program youre using.

+Good use of space btw.

...I might be crazy but she kind of looks stretched horizontally.

Thanks for the feedback. And photoshop cs6

 

[XX_PLANKER_xx]

I hope youre not put off by my feedback, its not meant to be offensive. Im just putting fourth what changes might help it imo.

Im also curious what images you used to make this.

 

[Ziggurist]

I do agree with Planker, I believe the gradients should come together, her hood stands out too much, and just that area shows lack of depth.

Lighting as well, You should try to work with different light sources. Whether it be a brush, a gradient, or a lighting c4d, have lights and dark areas of a signature. It really brings contrast and makes the focal pop.

 

I dont like the text : sing. You should improve the text.

For the overall, its good but play with lights. It seems too dark and theres a spot too white at the top of his hair.

Continue ur work

 

[Heaven Above]

I hope youre not put off by my feedback, its not meant to be offensive. Im just putting fourth what changes might help it imo.

Im also curious what images you used to make this.

I simply used one render, the backround is a variation of other rends/c4ds.

Also, it's not a girl...It's a boy.