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Jason_x

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Hey guys its been a while I made this banner for someone on SRL.
It didnt take too long and he wanted it clean but not too clean if that make sense.

Constructive criticism welcome =]

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There are some things that i don't like at all,, and the biggest one are the colors,, purple,pink and green?... doesn't match at all,, stick it with green only on this one,,

I also don't like that the "GE" in "EDGE" is shrinked cause of the leaves,, it doesn't matter if the text goes over the tree,, cause the text is the focal and not the tree

And where the white text is placed on,, the gray bar (sorry for my English),, change that to white and put it on overlay,, and don't let it bleed out of the canvas,,

Yea,, just make these few improvements and I'm sure it will look allot better
 
It would be an alright thing (for a bot) if you change the colors around a bit. Plus i don't like how the edge of the text is hidden. An try to center the experience part and stuff, as that would help alot.

Best Regards,
Nate
 
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The colours clash. Perhaps contense the writing also, so you don't have to squash the ends. With new colours it could look quite snazzy.
 
This looks better then most of the banners out there right now. It's simple and clear and something pleasing to look at. I think you did a good job.
 
It's nice but a few things about the colours. Make the background colour a darker grey, nearly black. This will help make the pattern a little more subtle whilst still quite simple. It also goes very well with bright red/pink as you picked for your text in the foreground.
 
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