Silverstein

[Monkey Business]

One of my favourite bands, text needs work, but do you like the idea?

CnC please.
v1

v2

v3 [New text and more C4Ds]

Here's the stock I used:

 

[Fro]

Pretty good man, why didn't you just use your other thread though?

 

[Monkey Business]

Cause they're two different tags ^.^

 

[Fro]

Still, it's like spam you should just use one thread and your post to show new ones..

 

[Kurt Cobain]

NO -____-
The focal point is not there, it's extremely dull and boring and monotone.
The text doesn't blend too well and the / strokes or stripes (w/e) look gay.
Get rid of the border and the gradient mapping / color balancing so you have less monotony.

 

[iPunk]

NO -____-
The focal point is not there, it's extremely dull and boring and monotone.
The text doesn't blend too well and the / strokes or stripes (w/e) look gay.
Get rid of the border and the gradient mapping / color balancing so you have less monotony.

hard comment, but threu

I don't like the flow in the signature and I don't like the text
I think you should concentrate on the flow. Use C4D's, brush and smudge with the flow. I think the text doesn't fit the sig... Try something else

 

[SatanInside]

Looks pretty awesome. Like the idea and everything

But that club/cudgel who is goin into middle of guitar is something that you should get rid off..

 

[Monkey Business]

Lol it's the microphone stand ;]

And I'll try a different text.