denny8569
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The silent killer creeping up behind you,
Is a mere projection of self in a reflective piece of glass,
No one weighs you down more than yourself,
Not even gravity, not even suspense,
All exterior factors are nonsense.
And, the more negativity clouds your mind,
The more it will project outward and attract evil of all kinds,
And, the more optimism defogs a mind of cluttered things,
The more it will project inward and bring you to happiness.
Silent but destructive this killer may be,
But, somehow you're still alive,
Breathing in beatings,
Breathing out exhaustion,
Mind running in chaotic circular motions,
But, sometime, somehow you'll get the notion,
That no matter what your past was compiled of,
It will always be a part of who you are,
Who you will be,
Your past will not dictate today and there after,
Today can be time for change,
Pessimism can be kicked off center stage.
Your reflection isn't much of a scary thing,
When you take the time to think,
In non-damaging ways,
Self destructive criticisms,
and sickly cynicism,
Shouldn't even be a part of your life,
Unless of course you never truly have the intention
of making things right.
I'm open to any suggestions. I really appreciate constructive criticism, it really helps me improve my writing. Thanks!
Is a mere projection of self in a reflective piece of glass,
No one weighs you down more than yourself,
Not even gravity, not even suspense,
All exterior factors are nonsense.
And, the more negativity clouds your mind,
The more it will project outward and attract evil of all kinds,
And, the more optimism defogs a mind of cluttered things,
The more it will project inward and bring you to happiness.
Silent but destructive this killer may be,
But, somehow you're still alive,
Breathing in beatings,
Breathing out exhaustion,
Mind running in chaotic circular motions,
But, sometime, somehow you'll get the notion,
That no matter what your past was compiled of,
It will always be a part of who you are,
Who you will be,
Your past will not dictate today and there after,
Today can be time for change,
Pessimism can be kicked off center stage.
Your reflection isn't much of a scary thing,
When you take the time to think,
In non-damaging ways,
Self destructive criticisms,
and sickly cynicism,
Shouldn't even be a part of your life,
Unless of course you never truly have the intention
of making things right.
I'm open to any suggestions. I really appreciate constructive criticism, it really helps me improve my writing. Thanks!