Signature I was working on for le duel

chaotic kid is banned now. le saderino to see this not put to use. was still working on the glow effects showing on the right side

love/hate

 

First one is pretty raw.
Second one's font annoys me a bit. It's kind of choppy in that you can see where the pixels break off. I'm not sure if that's the font used for whoever those people are?

 

I think this is one image.

@OP the top part is too blurry, the people behind the text are out of proportion which makes them look a bit squished and the stroke on the text makes it look pixelated. Don't take this the wrong way, just trying to provide some cnc.

 

Thanks for the cnc guys

 

Oh lol that's really awkward. Then I guess take that as a criticism, I couldn't even tell that it was one signature. Make it blend better by moving the wings a little down.

 

not a fan of the font, looks choppy which looks sloppy in my opinion.

The top looks kick ass though.

 

Move the top one in behind the bottom one slightly so the glare is about at shoulder level

 

Riperino



Anyways thanks for the feedback all

 

Not bad, the bottom half kind of looks unprofessional

 

Almost 25 posts eh?

 

the tsm pic/players looked streched.

 

Going to be 100% honest. Never been a fan particularly of your work, but your first signature definitely made me perk my eyes. Good work on that one

 

thanks for your feedback

 

Try to add a texture to the feathers. If you're building them from scratch, make a feather and try something basic like a wind effect on a texture. That'll improve your detail markedly.

 

Bump.

 

I like the first one a lot. Send me a pm on price to get one done

 

Free graphics subsection

 

It's one image

Thanks for your feedback

 

5char

 

Not too bad mate. I would place the top part under the "legends never die" so that wings hold up the text instead of steal the focal point. Maybe shrink the wings and symbol by a bit and fix the people so they are proportionate instead of short and fat