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She's a Lady

Bbrian

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CnC please

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Well, part of the text, is on the right, and cut of to the left....
 
Ok, well for me, other than the text this is acctualyy really nice.
 
The text wraps around, am I the only one that noticed? Haha

Anyway, I don't like the C4D coming out of the top. It ruins the flow and has an awkward feel of something between negative (because of the monochromatic, desaturated color) and positive (just because C4Ds are usually positive) space.
 
I really like the text, it's a nice idea, although it isn't very original. I am not very keen on the red C4D at the bottom though.
 
I really don't like the lighting up top. But everything else is good. Try making it more one color, it looks like random things complied together.
 
I don't like the lower c4d near her legs, and the soft brush erased parts of the c4d at the top.

Still, keep up the good work :)
 
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I don't like how her left leg is cut off.
 
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