Sheltering Evil [Not Done]

[~XS]

Obviously it's not done.

I feel like I'm overwhoring blending effects. I like how the angel looks but I can't get the demon just right. Suggestions?

The left side is too cluttered...

Too dark...

Text is just a placeholder, because I don't trust any of you. I do text last...

I don't really know what to do with the right. I don't really have anything that fits this theme (brushes, c4d's, etc.)

Too much gradient mapping? (I used 4 different ones mixed w/ blending effects.)

Suggestions please?

Also Tribal, get on MSN sometime. We have biznez to discuss.

 

[Kiabin]

The text isn't too good, although you did say you're not done. But, the colors blend too much and the motion blur never gives a good effect. Don't follow with any of the bull shit tutorials people on youtube give you. That's my biggest pet peeve.

 

[T R 1 B A L]

slightly too bright and too "high exposure", if you get what i mean, though the flow's alright.

Unclutter the left like you said, and match the theme of the text to the general, rusty red colour background

Placement's good by what i can see, though some dodging and lighting'll probably help.

Good job!

 

[fez...]

slightly too "high exposure", some dodging and lighting'll probably help.

Good job!

i agree with him, just the left side and the demon there is something missing that i cant get it right now, not sure what to say