Semi old tag

Made this about 1-2 months ago and I got a lot or praise for it and still looking for good feedback to improve my smudging.

 

[poopy2177]

pretty good smudging looks over sharpened and you need to work on your lighting

 

[Jiwi]

Not the best expert on 2d sigs, but I'd say composition and lighting need work. The stock looks rather bland and stuck in there, and there doesn't appear to be a single light source.

Not bad though

 

[Maze]

Looking great!