Selling Essay Writing Services- 3 Languages

[lilpjer]

Billy Jameson
My visit to Tokyo
Hi, my name is Billy Jameson. Recently my boss moved me from my post in South America to Tokyo. The plain flight was long and I fell asleep. The next thing I know I hear someone say “Wake up sleepy head,” it was the flight attendant. I yawned and stretched my arms. The plane was deserted except for a few flight attendants picking up. I grabbed my bag and suitcase and dragged them up the gangway into the airport. The room was buzzing with noise. I could hardly make out any words as I was not fluent in the native tongue. I picked my way around some teens and set off to meet my cab. A few minutes later I found myself on the entrance to the airport. I found my cab, threw my stuff in the back and hopped in.

 

[lilpjer]

1. your right something like this
2. I applied before i got accepted by swat

 

[Improv]

Billy Jameson
My visit to Tokyo
Hi, my name is Billy Jameson. Recently my boss moved me from my post in South America to Tokyo. The plain flight was long and I fell asleep. The next thing I know I hear someone say “Wake up sleepy head,” it was the flight attendant. I yawned and stretched my arms. The plane was deserted except for a few flight attendants picking up. I grabbed my bag and suitcase and dragged them up the gangway into the airport. The room was buzzing with noise. I could hardly make out any words as I was not fluent in the native tongue. I picked my way around some teens and set off to meet my cab. A few minutes later I found myself on the entrance to the airport. I found my cab, threw my stuff in the back and hopped in.

OoOoOo, looks like you showed him lil, Owned. Nice mini-mini-mini-mini essay.

 

[lilpjer]

yh my dad came in and was like "that's not history" lolz hahah is that ok? or do i need to do a whole page about pandas?

 

[lilpjer]

o.o only put in 1/2 of it leme put the rest in soz

 

[lilpjer]

As we drove the lights from the vast expanse of city flashed by me, I was overwhelmed with aw at this marvelous city. In around 10 minutes I found myself at my new office or as we called it outpost. I walked into the lobby and was greeted by a nice lady who ushered me into an elevator and told me the third room to the left on the fourth floor. I was handed the keys and then the elevator closed and I enjoyed the quick ride up to the fourth floor. I found my room and walked in. It was perfect! There was a bed, a separate bathroom, a computer, and a sofa and TV. I did a belly flop onto the soft bed and quickly fell asleep.
The next few months went by fast. My boss decided I should go back to base so I took the next plain home. I relaxed as I flew back to my home. I was greeted by my family who I hugged. I was escorted into our car and we drove back home. My visit to Tokyo was life changing. It showed me how different the world was and how diverse the many cultures are. I told my family to gather around and I told them my story.

Are you happy now?

 

[hahhah]

Those history essays are not yours. Even by that short piece i can tell, it has so many mistakes. I asked for a descriptive essay not a 10 year olds diary.

My visit to Tokyo
Hi, my name is Billy Jameson. Recently my boss moved me from my post in South America to Tokyo. The plain flight was long and I fell asleep. The next thing I know I hear someone say “Wake up sleepy head,” it was the flight attendant. I yawned and stretched my arms. The plane was deserted except for a few flight attendants picking up Picking up what?. I grabbed my bag and suitcase and dragged them up the gangway into the airport. The room was buzzing with noise. I could hardly make out any words as I was not fluent in the native tongue. I picked [I dont think this is used in the right context] my way around some teens and set off to meet my cab. Missing something here? A few minutes later I found myself on [You were ON the entrance?] the entrance to the airport. I found my cab, threw my stuff in the back and hopped in.

Not good atall. My little 5 year old brother could probably beat this.

 

[lilpjer]

I asked u for an essay and u didn't do anything? I did that super fast and im not gunna work hard for you?

 

[hahhah]

Punctuation is terrible, commas at the end of speach? So many grammatical changes could be made. The history essays are not yours. I can see from a mile off.

As we drove the lights from the vast expanse of city flashed by me, I was overwhelmed with aw at this marvelous city. In around 10 Use of numbers instead of letters is not good minutes I found myself at my new office or as we Who is 'We'? called it outpost. I walked into the lobby and was greeted by a nice lady who ushered me into an elevator and told me the third room to the left on the fourth floor Explain how she told you if everyone was japanese?. I was handed the keys and then the elevator closed and I enjoyed the quick ride up to the fourth floor. I found my room and walked in. It was perfect! There was a bed, a separate bathroom, a computer, and a sofa and TV. I did a belly flop onto the soft bed and quickly fell asleep.
The next few months went by fast. My boss decided I should go back to base Why did he say this? so I took the next plain home. I relaxed as I flew back to my home. I was greeted by my family who I hugged. I was Your family doesn't usually escort you escorted into our car and we drove back home. My visit to Tokyo was life changing. It showed me how different the world was and how diverse the many cultures are. I told my family to gather around and I told them my story.

The second part is better, but still. By the looks of 'your' first so called essays. You would have written these completely different.
The words in bold are spelt incorrect and the other parts i've commented on. But it just isn't good writing. I hope swat team or whatever they are called have fun with your terrible skills.

 

[lilpjer]

hmmm. write me an essay about your experience in World War II and how you bravely fought the nazis and japs and how you sucsessfuly killed 30 nazis and 20 japs... you do that girlie

 

[mrfreakingpeanut]

Actually not trying to start ethugging nvm

 

[lilpjer]

I review it like 3 times I didn't even review it.. did you notice how fast I wrote it. Now get to work writing the essay i assigned you. Oh and its 3 paragraphs or more.

 

[mrfreakingpeanut]

See previous post ethugging

 

[lilpjer]

im talking to hahhah and I wanna see her pathetic excuse for an essay i hope shes getting to work lets see how fast her little fingers can type. lol thanks anyways peanut dude

 

[hahhah]

I'll SCAN my own work onto the computer when i get home from uni. I won't rip it like some people.

 

[lilpjer]

oh and btw if your really want to see me right an essay than go to swatcrew's thread and requist that I write one. Of course it will cost you. Im sick of doing freebe's

 

[lilpjer]

Do the thing I assigned you i did your work you gave me mrs.teacher

 

[Benwise]

Attempting to sell ripped work?

No thanks!

 

[Benwise]

reopened.

 

[hahhah]

Thankyou That guy is a doosh. He can't even spell.