Second smudge entry

[T R 1 B A L]

Like this one better.

 

[Alteranz]

The type on the far left kills the depth for me :S
There's two overlapping layers, both in focus... it suddenly shifts the depth to very much flat and 2 dimensional.

 

[Emperor Nero]

I dig the atmosphere created by the colors though. Reminds of some sort of vortex or black hole.

 

[Do' Hei Shyi]

I can find no depth at all, and your focal is shying away from the canvas. Your flow is doing okay.