Second Sig Attept

[bl00db4th7]

Here's my first attempt at a sig:

Here's my second:

Any please help me to improve on my sig-making skills, constructive criticism is appreciated.

 

[Dustein]

The first one just looks like you fucked with filters and the render, but the second one looks like you over-killed with C4D's. I like the border on the second one, though.

EDIT: By the way, this is int he wrong section. Next time, post your work in the GFX Showcase.

 

[cnady2]

umm 1st one is fail...
and the 2nd only has good strokes, nothing else :S keep it going :#