Second Attempt Of the Day :)

[Harry]

This is my second sig today and ever, hopefully its a bit better.
Please let me know what I can do to improve it.

 

The flare is over powering the image, start by fixing that. I really don't know if your going at a tag or C4D piece as it's a mixture, but if your going for the tag design you would really want to look into the rule of thirds.

 

Basically I can only offer the same advice I gave for your last one. It's pretty much the same with the exception of the different colors and different placement of stocks, etc. I'm not a fan of the backgrounds in either of your pieces as they're just randomly placed effects, there isn't really any coherency to them.

 

[ZippyGFX]

Basically what jack said, It has the same problems as before. Try reading the feedback we gave you and implementing it in.

 

[Harry]

Please let me know if im getting better! hopefully i am, if im not might as well keep trying

now relaised once uploaded the blending is pretty crappy, but just wonted some opinions!

 

[Juan Sheet]

The second one looks great buy the F looks a bit stranded as the A, D and E are all quite close, (maybe that's just me being fussy) but great work!

 

Please let me know if im getting better! hopefully i am, if im not might as well keep trying

now relaised once uploaded the blending is pretty crappy, but just wonted some opinions!

The background is pretty average and the blending is ok, but it's good that you are getting a feel for it. Not all of the effects need to overlap the text to help blend it, but you will find that out later when you start experimenting with it.

 

[Fendle]

The background looks generic, also it looks plain and rectangular. The flash in the middle is also over powering. Good second attempt tho.