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Remembering some old Lyrics

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Basically, story is plain and simple. I wrote a song for a girl back in 8th Grade camp. I burnt it because reading it caused too much heart ache.

I'm trying to remember the lyrics for the song now and I will post my progress. Please note its just a summary of the over all idea. It won't really rhyme or flow. Just trying to piece the song back together. I'll be completing it over the next few weeks I hope.

The Girl I could never call mine​

I saw you running and laughing in the grassy hills
I looked on took a deep breath and walked on by
Watching as my Cinderella vanished into the gentle mist

The pain in my heart of knowing you'd never be mine
Only three words I wished I could have whispered to you
Three simple words engraved across my heart for you.

How could I ever dream of calling you mine.
Sleepless nights, wishing you were in my arms

Looking into your eyes was a dagger through the heart
I knew we would always be apart
girl, could I call you mine just for one sunset
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All I can recover so far, its just the basic concept some words were different. I'll try fix them up later on.
 
I like it alot to be honest, could you PM the final draft when you finish?

Thanks, g0d_
 
Been busy with exams and stuff lately, Haven't been able to change it and add more :(. Getting my guitar back soon too! Then hopefully i can record it.
 
Not sure if srs or just newfag...
I'll steal it from you to win a girl's heart mmkay?
 
for what you have so far, my rating for these lyrics are a 4....out of................................................................................................................................................
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...................................................................5 :idea:
 
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