Recently made some rap@studio critcism?

[DrDre]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gJuDl9POe5A&context=C4ab3e70ADvjVQa1PpcFM7McKd-whcG-Dpy5b3sr6S17DBjUaqWlY=


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8gZbnW-iS9M&feature=relmfu



Both different styles song by did chorus + everything criticism please and what I need to work on?

Thanks,
DrDre

Tried to slow down for the beat on the 2nd one (Drake jay-z light up beat)

First one I dont remember where I got the beat friend found it online

 

[body_bags]

the lyrics were ok. but flow is madd off beat