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   DrDre Forum Addict

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   Recently made some rap@studio critcism?

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   http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gJuDl9POe5A&context=C4ab3e70ADvjVQa1PpcFM7McKd-whcG-Dpy5b3sr6S17DBjUaqWlY=
   
   
   http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8gZbnW-iS9M&feature=relmfu
   
   
   
   Both different styles song by did chorus + everything criticism please and what I need to work on?
   
   Thanks,
   DrDre
   
   Tried to slow down for the beat on the 2nd one (Drake jay-z light up beat)
   
   First one I dont remember where I got the beat friend found it online

    

   DrDre, Apr 11, 2012

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   body_bags Forum Addict

   

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   Recently made some rap@studio critcism?

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   the lyrics were ok. but flow is madd off beat

    

   body_bags, Apr 16, 2012

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