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durial20

durial20

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Well.
First.
Grow some balls.
Now you can come here.
Post you sig.
I will give you CnC that will tell you what's wrong.
Don't expect me to be nice.
Why? I have some spare time and I don't feel like doing 12 pages of chemistry homework.
 
From all the advice given, I made this:

-No blurring
-Lots of lighting effects
-Tons of layer effects
-Sharpened a bit more
-Used blending for depth

Better then my older signatures??
 
The blending attempt was a fail.
The black and white background DOES NOT fit a colorful render choice.
You need to create a scene with your background.
Depth was a failure.
Lighting is the main source of depth and your lighting is fail.
Text is bad does not fit with anything.
The background seems very poor.
Sig does not flow.
Render does not match background style wise.
No WOW factor.
No effects.
 
Ok well i know that its not that good lol i was just stuffing around to see if i could learn some things. Here it is.... there is 4 versions.

Version 1:
hitmansigv1hf8.png

Version 2:
hitmansigv2am3.png

Version 3:
hitmansigv3py6.png

Version 4:
hitmansigv4xo6.png


None of the versions are really different just moved and changed the colour of the text.
Edit: Lmao the forum colour is fighting with my sig =/.
Heres the links if you want to look at them without the blue.
http://img509.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hitmansigv1hf8.png
http://img137.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hitmansigv2am3.png
http://img137.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hitmansigv3py6.png
http://img138.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hitmansigv4xo6.png
 
Phil said:
2wdq1wj.png
Click to expand...
The text is meh.
The dot trick is a bit whored.
The flow is a bit random I don't see where you wanted it to flow, it seems to go towards the center but at the same time from the center outwards.
The blending is decent, wouldnt say the BEST but good.
Good effects, meh usage. I would like to see more used above the render.
The background is a bit flat and dull.
Good sharpening on face but oversharpened on the necklace chain.
Ew......1 px black border.
 
pure_trainer said:
Ok well i know that its not that good lol i was just stuffing around to see if i could learn some things. Here it is.... there is 4 versions.

Version 1:
hitmansigv1hf8.png

Version 2:
hitmansigv2am3.png

Version 3:
hitmansigv3py6.png

Version 4:
hitmansigv4xo6.png


None of the versions are really different just moved and changed the colour of the text.
Edit: Lmao the forum colour is fighting with my sig =/.
Heres the links if you want to look at them without the blue.
http://img509.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hitmansigv1hf8.png
http://img137.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hitmansigv2am3.png
http://img137.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hitmansigv3py6.png
http://img138.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hitmansigv4xo6.png
Click to expand...

Your blending is bad. Why is it blending in from the bottom....
The effects crappy doesnt fit the style.
Colors are dull and flat.
Sig is uber flat.
Bad usage of solid shapes.
Text needs a lot of work.
The size is horrific.
Wheres the lighting...
Why does he have a halo flying out of his head...(bad lense flare I guess)
The black is choppy chaotic and random.
No feelings in the sig it's just there and very bleh.
I don't know whether the sig should end or it just got cut off. (If you get what I mean. It doesn't flow to a close)
Lack of flow.
 
Xjaa said:
lulzfiredull.png

(bbri)
Click to expand...

Digging the dark left. But it doesnt balance well with the right. If the right was darker I think it would have strong depth.
The sprite has too many things on it on overlay near the bottom giving it that odd color.
The text idea where you smudged the text with a really sharp strong smudge and then put text over it again doesn't look good.
The lighting is well done.
I'd like to see an effect. It seems background+sprite no effects.
The bars don't fit at the top and bottom.
Near the bottom left like 75% of the way left. That part pokes out of the background and really draws my eyes away from the sprite.
Once again good job on the lighting.
Near the bottom of his feet is very dull and just doesnt look good.
 
DeMoNiC.gif
 
Ripple set to lighten= fail.
motion blur set to lighting = double fail
text in a color that has not once appeared in your sig= triple fail
No flow
No depth
Bad effects
Ew.
Filter whored.
 
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