its ok, dont really like the multiple renders, and the background on her face should b blended roud the edge of her face a little more, i do like the text idea though.
5/10
cc = contructive criticism, not contrstructive and criticsim, gf tho
i'd rate 5/10, as mj pointed out, the multiple layers are kinda distracting, try focusing on one point of interest rather than 3, or 6 if ur a perve (lol)
I really don't like this, the main problem I have with it is the way the brushing/c4d/whatever it is goes onto the woman's face, your text looks horrible, in both choice of font, and placement.