Rate my first sig?

Well, I decided to try and make my own signature. I know I have alot of learning to do yet, but I was wondering how you think I'm doing so far.

 

much better then my first sig but i think its a bit to choppy looking and then ur name it gets randomly thick but u had better talent then me my first time 8/10 for your first time

 

to big try 340x120 around that size is a good size for a sig

u should take some smudge tuts and dl some brushes tutorials are your freind

 

Lol, thanks for the feedback. Yeah, guess I should look into some of those tuts soon, but I made that using Gimp so I can't really find any additional brushes for it atm :S

 

Look on deviant art for brushes, but you can make your own... .gbr files

Anyway, SO MUCH STICHING, ahahahaha, moderatly suits the render though...I can't give advice because 1) I'm not one for flashy sigs and 2) I don't make them