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Rate my first ever project! :)

Discussion in 'Graphics Gallery' started by zuaki, Aug 12, 2011.

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What do you think?

  1. It sucks.

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  2. It's not bad.

    3 vote(s)
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  3. I like it...

    4 vote(s)
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  4. Nice job, Keep it up!

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  1. zuaki

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    Rate my first ever project! :)

    Hey guys. This is my first ever picture that I spent a decent amount of time on in Photoshop CS5. Asides from my terrible sig and avatar, this is my first ever 'project' I made. It took me about an 30 minutes to an hour to do. ( I did take half a year of graphic design my freshman year in highschool lol. )

    Anyways... These are the two images I used in my picture. Everything else was done by effects and other tools.

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    Please constructively criticize my picture!
     
  2. Fayded

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    Looks Fantastic! Keep at it!
     
  3. Matchh

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    I like it :)
     
  4. Kinaesthic

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    Rate my first ever project! :)

    Moved this for you as you put it in the wrong section.
    Overall it looks pretty basic, I can see some artistic filters in there but thats it..
    Like I said, it's basic but OK for your first project, tho I recommend you to watch either some tutorials or mess around a bit before you start a "Project"!
     
  5. DMR

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    I like it, you should have made the realm in the back black as well, it will look nicer that way. A black and red picture.

    6/10.
     
  6. zuaki

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    Thanks for the ideas and comments! And thanks for the relocation Kinaesthic.
     
  7. hold alt f4

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    looks nice, resize the image though wanna see the full pic :D
     
  8. peds

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    Rate my first ever project! :)

    Its good I like it but yea the yellow in the background kinda sticks out a bit like DMR said you should change the hue to match your red and black scheme you got in the foreground. Or perhaps go another route and make it all monochromatic or even gray scale with some red splatter to pull attention where you want it :)
     
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    Goodwork bro it seems abit unbalanced but keep it up and you may be a successful gfx designer here in the future :p
     
  10. Zachhh

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    looks good for your first project, keep up the good work
     
  11. theGuitarist

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    Red and black (my fav colors <3). Anyways I believe this is pretty amazing if its your first project. You can be an aspiring artist just like Kinaesthic :p
    Keep it up though dont stop
     
  12. 4Fortune

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    It looks cool to people that cant make their own gfx, thats basically all the talent u need.
     
  13. bzzbzz

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    I voted "Its not bad." cause we don't see the background on the right :(
     
  14. Krizzled

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    Not bad, Its alright great job keep it up bro!
     
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