Rate My 3rd Project ever :)

[retard_tard]

ADDED: My current avatar is my 5th project, please rate that too

I know its not very good. but keep in mind this is only my 3rd one ever made
just wanna know if im on the right track

 

[SlaveOfTheBeast]

Way to big.

 

[retard_tard]

Besides that... i can resize it if i wanna use it for avatar

 

[Decisive]

Its pretty good because im not really good at making orbs. Try not to make the render move of the center of attention. The lettering is plain and then render draws my eyes from the everything else. Also the render is off, its not equally lined up to be in the middle. Maybe if you line the render up in the middle, then made the lettering bigger and made it overlap the render just a bit it would look a little better.

 

[retard_tard]

thanks

 

[RancidSmoke]

Very nice orb

 

[etiosa]

RancidSmoke nice wannabe avatar lol