Rate and suggets improvements

 

It's quite calm and peaceful compared to your other work which is more in your face. By no means am I qualified to give you any suggestions but my personal opinion is that the white font with the light blue background isn't immediately noticeable. Other than that, I really do like it, good job.

 

Good Job no improvements that I can see are needed.

 

It's quite calm and peaceful compared to your other work which is more in your face. By no means am I qualified to give you any suggestions but my personal opinion is that the white font with the light blue background isn't immediately noticeable. Other than that, I really do like it, good job.

Yeah, the calm and almost therapeutic look was what I went for! You're right. I think it would look a little better with navy blue for the font on the buttons.

Good Job no improvements that I can see are needed.

Improvements can always be made! ^^

 

Darker background on the "buy/sell rs3&07" might look cleaner and also more visible (especially on mobile). I wouldn't change the font though. Other than that, this looks really nice.

 

[Azie]

Looks sick

 

Its a very dope sig, just the "BUY/SELL RS3, SWAPPING" and ect sucks. Maybe use a different font for that part and you'll be golden

 

Its a very dope sig, just the "BUY/SELL RS3, SWAPPING" and ect sucks. Maybe use a different font for that part and you'll be golden

Thanks mate. The buttons can definitely be improved, but I think Merienda fits perfectly ^^

 

Thanks mate. The buttons can definitely be improved, but I think Merienda fits perfectly ^^

haha, everything about that sig is perfect, main font, theme, animations and ect! just the bottom subtext threw me off but ya aside from that still a 10/10 piece

 

haha, everything about that sig is perfect, main font, theme, animations and ect! just the bottom subtext threw me off but ya aside from that still a 10/10 piece

Appreciate these words a lot! Especially from an old timer like you!

 

[MohtasaUnique]

The most glaring thing is the confusing foreground and background spacial elements. The lack of a noticeable depth of field makes it appear flat, and the only thing that's saving it from being totally devoid of depth is the animated reflective water bits, but they also present their own problem. You have surface reflections overlaying bits that are supposed to be underwater, adding extra confusion to your spacial elements.

My suggestion to you is to add in depth of field blurring, and move or remove the animated water reflection that's superimposed on top of the coral in the top-left.

Second thing to point out has been mentioned a few times: the font, color, and blending of the small type at the bottom looks out of place on top of the ribbon elements. The curves don't quite follow that of the ribbons, and the exposure doesn't match either.

Still a cool concept though. I vehemently resist this 3D letter trend that Kina started years ago, but this is still pretty cool