Rap Lyrics I Wrote(yes me)

Ok, Ya i got bored yesterday since the internet was down, so I took out a notebook, and I remember I used to write some raps for my cousin, but this time i worte it for myself. So check it out tell me what you think of it.

Like a lady in labor I push
My spirit to limits no one could imagine
So much pressure lungs'll collapse and skulls'll get smashed in
Millions die, hundreds adapting
Situations tighter than the muscles in her stomach contracting
So we hunt till we catch them
It's a jungle – this the dungeon we trapped in
Blood splashed over last crumbs – hunger and famine
No one trust their own actions
Predators become the preys – what the fuck's gonna happen?
Sharks drown - and dark clouds cover this atlas
Hearts pound – heavy pulses and tantrums
Everybody falls down
The shocks is electric
Bodies drop - on every block it gets hectic
Cops be calling cops who call the nurses, doctors, and medics
The pills are popped for the headaches
It gotsta be the way hip hop is presented
And how emcees just stand and watch, it's pathetic
But I'm coming – hear me knock and regret it
I take you back in time so turn your clocks if you dummies forgot to reset it

It took around 2 hours, I had to think really hard and think about things that were going around in my life and in the world.Tell me what u think of it.
-Xix

 

very nice . I like the rhyming scheme

 

thank you