Random Poem

[Happendy]

Saw this section, so I thought I might post up one of my poems in my archives on here.
I'm just really bored lol....

Colors and Hues

Who will be my light?...
If not even you,
Are highlighted white?

Who do I attack?...
If no one but you,
Is shaded black?

Through all you knew...
Not even once,
Were your eyes painted blue.

Done with what's said...
Not for a moment,
Were your lips stained red.

On who do I lean?...
If all around me,
Is no longer green?

I'm just one fellow...
Not much I can do,
But color this star yellow

 

[Antoine]

I guess its not bad, at least better than all of mine -_-.

 

[Happendy]

Oh really?
I'd love to read some of it if you'd let me =D

 

[jazmer1]

very nice poem i spose.

 

[Upfired]

Not bad

 

[teebag]

pretty gooood =p

 

[Mechanical Scythe]

It's pretty good i like how the entire poem seems to maintain its inquisitive nature.