Quickly Drawn - MoonGlare

[PrayerKid]

Well i tried drawing this quickly as i didn't want to have to take an hour on it again.

Would have looked better if my pencil was sharper, and i wasn't drawing on lined paper, and my hand was cramping like a mofo.

The R looks like total shit i know that, but how's the design?

[I'm not the best at drawing i picture things in my head amazing, but when i go to put them down, it's not so nice. I tend to make one thing nice one time, if i try and re-create it...it ends up lookin like poop. Anywhom here ya go moon, lemmi know what i should try to do with it]

IMO it looks good up until the L then it just starts to look...bad.

 

[MohtasaUnique]

The theme you developed with the M and the N should be implemented on the A and the E for more uniformity (I'm talking about the detached middle portion)

Also, I don't know if maybe it's the angle coupled with a warping in the paper, but the letters "ARE" are slanting upwards at the bottom. You should pencil in light guidelines for the top, bottom, and mid-markings for the letters for consistency's sake.

 

[PrayerKid]

Yeah it was kinda going up but my hand was cramping like a mo fo xD didn't realize it till it was finished but it's the concept i'm trying to get looked at..

But thanks for the feedback.
Like i stated i'm new to drawing so i have yet to learn the little things that help tons like that

Thanks

EDIT: What would i do to it, to remove that ugly space between the G and the L

 

The 'M' and 'N' stand out. Might take the 'M' into photoshop and fool around with and and post back here :3 Thanks for this though babe <3

 

[PrayerKid]

The 'M' and 'N' stand out. Might take the 'M' into photoshop and fool around with and and post back here :3 Thanks for this though babe <3

Alright :3 Do it! I'm downloading PS tonight, so maybe you could give me a hand on starting to learn a few things? <3

 

[Detroit]

This'd look awesome if you'd were to use a ruler!

 

[PrayerKid]

This'd look awesome if you'd were to use a ruler!

haha thanks, when i find my damn drawing book i'll be sure to make some guide lines next time i draw something xD

Probably going to be drawing myself a signature next one, as ill have PS to make it all fancy (with a little help <3) :3

 

Rushed but here it is :3

 

[PrayerKid]

Rushed but here it is :3

i think if made small enough that style of txt would make a nice UI
or sig

 

[Host]

Don't really think it's as good as your other one, from 'M' - 'G' it flows nicely and has a nice order but after that, as you said, it looses it's consistency.

 

[PrayerKid]

Don't really think it's as good as your other one, from 'M' - 'G' it flows nicely and has a nice order but after that, as you said, it looses it's consistency.

Yeah, i did try drawing this one faster tho so not as much thought or time was put in it. But i still thing the M-g turned out nice

Thanks for the feedback

 

Looks alright, the 'R' is messed up imo

 

[PIAV]

Is it just me or do the letters seem to start getting smaller and smaller towards the end? good effort, needs some tweaks.

 

This'd look awesome if you'd were to use a ruler!

I'd suggest the opposite. As someone that does an art-based degree I only ever use rulers for measurements.

 

I'd suggest the opposite. As someone that does an art-based degree I only ever use rulers for measurements.

Yeah definitely. Only use instruments for a final design, not for concept sketches. Sketches are meant to be freehand for a reason.
OP, you should look into construction boxes, this will help to keep your letters in a straight line and the same scale.

 

[PrayerKid]

Yeah definitely. Only use instruments for a final design, not for concept sketches. Sketches are meant to be freehand for a reason.
OP, you should look into construction boxes, this will help to keep your letters in a straight line and the same scale.

wtf is a construction box i got photoshop but i'm still waiting to get it onto my pc...so hopefully i'm able to start learning a bit how to use it...