Project: Yi

[One Abomination]

Haven't done a typical signature in a very long time, just glad I could conjure something up with this creative block.

PS if anyone has any resource packs or links they could post, that'd be much appreciated. Since I lost my old compter's resources i've been googling just about everything, which gets reaally tedious.

Updated/Reworked version;

layers:
https://i.gyazo.com/31df05f56990c758859bf277861fd466.gif

 

[Mathewkthxbai]

It is a bit bright

 

[One Abomination]

It is a bit bright

Honestly, that helps me none at all and is the equivalent of spamming in my opinion.
Constructive criticism goes a long way and is much appreciated, but "a bit bright" doesn't do much good at all.

 

[theArc]

A agree that it is a bit bright but I'll also offer some advice. To me, the light is so bright it takes away from the subject, Yi. Try lowering the brightness or change Yi to more on top of the light. Nice work though!

 

[Felix]

Like everyone else is saying, ya it is a bit bright but overall it's a pretty nice piece. Another thing you should try doing is not going so much with fractals, but practice blending the render in with the background

 

[One Abomination]

A agree that it is a bit bright but I'll also offer some advice. To me, the light is so bright it takes away from the subject, Yi. Try lowering the brightness or change Yi to more on top of the light. Nice work though!

Added a version I finished off earlier today when I woke up!

Like everyone else is saying, ya it is a bit bright but overall it's a pretty nice piece. Another thing you should try doing is not going so much with fractals, but practice blending the render in with the background

I didn't use a fractal for this piece, is there something else you're talking about?

 

[theArc]

Added a version I finished off earlier today when I woke up!

So much better! Looks really good