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Pharrell

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Well, this was my second shot at messing around with some random stock photos. This one turned out rather well; it actually turned out better then I had thought.

I know the top collarbone on the sweater is a bit over-sharpened. I understand that. That's my own unique style (regardless if you think it makes the photo look less exciting). I like bright tags, that's just the way I like/love to make them.

Anyway, feedback/(constructive) criticism is always encouraged. ^_^
 
Seems too sharp, mainly around his hands and front of t-shirt. Needs more effects in the empty space on the left.
 
i agree with Spraynwipe Looks simple, need more effects. hands looks weird. whats the weird blue thingy. doesn't match all. keep working at it
 
i agree with Spraynwipe Looks simple, need more effects. hands looks weird. whats the weird blue thingy. doesn't match all. keep working at it

  • It's supposed to be simple
  • There's enough "effects"
  • Hands look fine
  • That "weird blue thingy" is an "effect" which you just proposed I need more of
  • It's unique, it doesn't need to match.
  • Why are you even critiquing my work?

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  • It's supposed to be simple
  • There's enough "effects"
  • Hands look fine
  • That "weird blue thingy" is an "effect" which you just proposed I need more of
  • It's unique, it doesn't need to match.
  • Why are you even critiquing my work?

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sry if you got mad buddy. you asked for criticism. just trying to help beginners out.
Anyway, feedback/(constructive) criticism is always encouraged. ^_^
 
sry if you got mad buddy. you asked for criticism. just trying to help beginners out.

You're far from being in the position to criticize/critique others work when you, yourself, are far from "gud at gfx yo lolz".

Any other professional/skilled artists are more then welcome to critique my work (they know what they're talking about). You referred to my C4D render as a "weird blue thingy", that further proves your incompetence and lack of knowledge in the graphics area. Leave the constructive criticism to those that are competent and know what a "weird blue thingy" is (C4D render).
 
I like that, its nice.

You should mess around with the hands though
 
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