Our Time

[dragonfire455]

私たちの時間が一緒に短いものだった過ごした. 私はそれも短いなあ.

あなたは私たちがたくさん戦った知っている. 私は私たちはもっと戦ってほしい.

我々は時間泣いて過ごした。私はもっと泣いてほしい。

なぜあなたは私を愛して言ったの？ それはうそだ知っている.

私は今何もしないよ。それは本当に悲しいのようなものだ。

私達の時間は短いものだった。



これは、ベストタイムは私が今まであっ.




For those who can't speak Japanese, I'll translate it for you.



Our time was short. I wish it were shorter.

You and I fought a lot. I wish we fought more.

We spent a lot of time crying. I wish you cried more.

Why do you say you love me? I know that's a lie.

Now I'm here doing nothing. It's rather kind of sad.

Our time was short.

That was the best time I ever had.



Romaji:

Watashitachi no jikan ga issho ni mijikai monodatta sugoshita. Watashi wa sore mo mijikai na.

Anata wa watashitachi ga takusan tatakatta shitte iru. Watashi wa watashitachi wa motto tatakatte hoshii.

Wareware wa jikan naite sugoshita. Watashi wa motto naite hoshii.

Naze anata wa watashi o aishite itta no? Sore wa usoda shitte iru.

Watashi wa ima nani mo shinai yo. Sore wa hontoni kanashii no yona monoda.

Watashitachi no jikan wa mijikai monodatta.

Kore wa, besutotaimu wa watashi ga ima made atsu.




Sorry for this piece of shit I just wrote. I was bored.

 

[Varjot]

Dark, I love it. "That was the best time I ever had". I love how that line adds a silver lining to what seems like a thunderstorm of a relationship. Don't be so quick to judge your own work, there are many critics more then willing to do that for you. Great stuff man, short and sweet. Keep it up!

 

[dragonfire455]

Alright! Thanks :3

 

[Mechanical Scythe]

Now I'm here doing nothing. It's rather kind of sad.

Our time was short.

That was the best time I ever had.

What a great stanza..It seems to induce past emotion like a silent echo.