Opinions on a thread template please

[Rodman]

Graphic design student practicing some template work, feedback please.

 

[Mister Slyther]

Nice work man! im assuming you did the illustrations?

The only thing slightly annoying is the laptop screen. It's blurry.

Other than that, i like it

 

[Rodman]

Nice work man! im assuming you did the illustrations?

The only thing slightly annoying is the laptop screen. It's blurry.

Other than that, i like it

Sadly not, illustration is my downfall, mostly Photo manip and UI stuff, just getting back into things.

 

[Amazer]

I love the work! It is exactly my favorite type of style.

 

[Rodman]

I love the work! It is exactly my favorite type of style.

Thanks, planning on doing some other storefront templates soon.

 

[JayiARTS]

I personally like the design, it's simple and minimalist.

I would change how the tablet on the second slide looks though, it has a weird outter stroke on it.

 

[Rodman]

I personally like the design, it's simple and minimalist.

I would change how the tablet on the second slide looks though, it has a weird outter stroke on it.

Thanks for the feedback, Yeah i see what you mean now.

 

[tinkerbell]

I quite like it who made it?

 

[Rodman]

I quite like it who made it?

I did

 

[Brostar]

looks sick af

 

[Dono]

nice job rod!

 

[MtJunks]

Really clear and to the point good work