Oliver

[Kristian4th]

I didn't notice the edges until I uploaded it sorry, try to disregard them

 

[wombakage]

What even is it supposed to be? Its hyper glammed up, and filled up bubbles and weird effects. Just looks kinda immature.
Nice stock I geuss

 

[Lukef555]

TO be honest it looks like you just threw random shit in there, try and coordinate it more.

 

[Spraynwipe]

The little zig zag bolts and other stuff need to be cleaned up a bit, then you've got a decent start. Fix up those edges, work on lighting and effects.

 

[moopl]

lightning bolts and stars are too obvious