New tag - Snow

[Draucia]

I really like this tag because it's very colorful ^.^:

V1: A (just 1!!!!) c4d, clipping masks, splatter brushes, etc.

This one is the same, but with red and white:

V2: Just the same, different colors.

Could somebody tell me which one's better, and if these two (tell me which one, please) are better then this:

(because I might use one of these for the gfx battle against kovan).

C&C

 

[kovan]

I like the red and white one very much ,, but more red in it would look good
and also a different render would look better with this style ..

don't have much to say to improve it really , since it's pretty good

and also, i don't like the text, it's to far away and kinda boring

 

I agree with kovan. The second one is better, the first is just too bright.
Maybe you could add a bit more contrast to accentuate the render?
Darken the edges maybe?

 

[Draucia]

I like the red and white one very much ,, but more red in it would look good
and also a different render would look better with this style ..

don't have much to say to improve it really , since it's pretty good

and also, i don't like the text, it's to far away and kinda boring

Ahh, but why shall I trust the enemy? Lol jk.
I picked the stock because I wanted the theme to be snow (isn't it funny that her last name is snow? ), as for the red, I'll look into that.
Text: Aww, I tried to make it unnoticeable (so it doesn't distract the attention from the focal), but I'll look into that also.

But is this red and white signature better then the current entry:

?

EDIT: Oh yeah and thanks for the feedback kovan, waiting for your entry .

@biliyad1:

I'm going to try that, thanks.

Stock, Render two different things?

 

[kovan]

I'll post my entry up for CnC ,

and yea the red and white is better than your current one