try to make the focal point apply to the rule of thirds. Also, the colouring is slightly too purple, and a little cliche (because of the overused purple to orange gradient).
Try to vary the colours more, but good work
Try to vary the colours more, but good work
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try to make the focal point apply to the rule of thirds. Also, the colouring is slightly too purple, and a little cliche (because of the overused purple to orange gradient).
Try to vary the colours more, but good work
If I put the girl on the side a bit, I can't really have a flow outward anymore (which I like). I would either have to make it come to the left, right, or diagnal.
@Coloring: Yeah I guess it has a bit too much purple, but I kinda like it.
Is the text good this time?
And thanks for the feedback!
(I put gaze because shes kinda gazing at the sky).
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Idk, I kinda like it, allthough it's too much purple IMO. 
The render itself isn't very good to work with, since it doesn't have a good natural flow.
and the purple is overwhelming, and at least have a part of her on a hotspot - that's why it's a bad render.
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I picked the STOCK because I thought it would go nice into a signature.
By hotspot do you mean the intersection of the lines in the rule of the thirds?
EDIT:
Idk, I kinda like it, allthough it's too much purple IMO.
Yeah, it does have a bit too much.
Thanks for the feedback.
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