B BoxWood Apprentice Joined Jun 21, 2008 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 798 Sep 29, 2008 #1 You know what to do.
H Haunted Apprentice Joined Jan 21, 2007 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 980 Sep 29, 2008 #2 Looks nice , you could improve the lightsource and some more effects.
bizcuits21 Forum Addict Joined Oct 18, 2007 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 562 Location Talking to Decisive Sep 29, 2008 #3 The sudden transition to white looks weird, improved light source, stay with basic text.
B BoxWood Apprentice Joined Jun 21, 2008 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 798 Sep 29, 2008 #4 I'll keep that in mind bizcuits.
H Haunted Apprentice Joined Jan 21, 2007 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 980 Sep 29, 2008 #5 Look where the light is coming from don't just simply put a white brush in there.
B BoxWood Apprentice Joined Jun 21, 2008 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 798 Sep 29, 2008 #6 Haunted said: Look where the light is coming from don't just simply put a white brush in there. Click to expand... The light is coming from the right and that's where it is...
Haunted said: Look where the light is coming from don't just simply put a white brush in there. Click to expand... The light is coming from the right and that's where it is...
Jansen Retired Admin :'( Joined Apr 22, 2005 Sythe Gold 15 Messages 5,217 Sep 29, 2008 #7 Haunted said: Looks nice , you could improve the lightsource and some more effects. Click to expand... Agreed. Also, the text is not done very well Other than that, I like it.
Haunted said: Looks nice , you could improve the lightsource and some more effects. Click to expand... Agreed. Also, the text is not done very well Other than that, I like it.
B BoxWood Apprentice Joined Jun 21, 2008 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 798 Sep 29, 2008 #8 Jansen said: Agreed. Also, the text is not done very well Other than that, I like it. Click to expand... Well, Thankey You.
Jansen said: Agreed. Also, the text is not done very well Other than that, I like it. Click to expand... Well, Thankey You.
riipped Apprentice Joined Dec 29, 2007 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 874 Age 34 Location Florida Sep 29, 2008 #9 The text is the only issue. Fix that up and you'll be all set. Placement is decent, but mainly the font & color. I would go with a dark grey instead of black for "Boxwood". Just gives it a better flow.
The text is the only issue. Fix that up and you'll be all set. Placement is decent, but mainly the font & color. I would go with a dark grey instead of black for "Boxwood". Just gives it a better flow.