New song Dead Child

[Unerth]

Dead Child in a grave
wish me luck before i fade
Dead child its okay
Maybe todays not that day

dead child in a grave
dont let me go away

dead child in a grave
wish me luck before i fade
dead child its okay
maybe todays not that day

dead child in a grave
dont let me go away

dead child dead child
dead child dead child
its okay



the things i do are ment to be interpreted
its not litterally

this song is not about a dead child unless YOU think it is

 

[caseyscoolerthanu]

Try writing it in a more structured fashion? It seemed too short. Also, I didn't quite get it when you said "Dead child it's okay." I know it has some sort of meaning...but its just not there for me.

4/10

 

[Unerth]

uhh idk didnt spend much time on it and mm idk still idont think im gonna be posting many more songs on here to many trollers...

 

[caseyscoolerthanu]

uhh idk didnt spend much time on it and mm idk still idont think im gonna be posting many more songs on here to many trollers...

We're not trollers, we just have a questions, interpretations, and opinions. :laugh:

 

[Ownfir]

I agree with the above poster. It's sorta meaningless unless you feel like explaining it. It doesn't feel like the lyrics have any structure, and it kinda lacks a proper chorus. Other than that it's ok.

 

[caseyscoolerthanu]

At least somebody agrees with me ^

 

[SilentLegacy]

~I Like It It Should Be Make Longer Than Into a Song~

 

[Zak_rs2]

errrr can't say i'd buy the album :love:

 

[20 cb]

lol i know a good song that my friends wrote its called cold hearted by the wonder boys!

 

[wtp]

You should write it from a literal perspective; It's emotional you can talk about a lot.