Focal placement's pretty nice, though i'm not liking the double lighting from opposite sides, since realistically the light's only coming from ahead of her, which is why the parts of her jawbone and neck aren't lit up, as they would be if the light source was where you put it to be.
I'm not liking the patchy blur and random depth of field ever, blurring and sharpening is to imitate a fast aperture lens, where only the subject of the photo is sharp, with the background being blurred out - here it seems random spots are sharp and random spots are blurry, holding no key to where in the signature the background/foreground/middleground 's are.
Motion blur has made the flow go sideways, when realistically it's in the shape of the stock, that is diagonally up. text could be far better integrated, and please anti alias it next time.