i really like it, the colouring is very nice and the text looks really good. the render i think is either a little small or too low down, you should maybe make him stand out a little more, but not too much more.
goood work man
sorry to be a little off topic, but why do people bash c4d's so much. the flame stock you used is hardly noticable, and if it was a c4d, what would make it so bad? i really dont get it.