New Logo Style/Placing

[Clank]

Hey,
I haven't posted in here for a long while now, and I've been 'honing' my skills in photoshop in my absence.
I'm sure most of you have seen my first logo, which Vision Ex helped me design, (the black one, in my sig currently.) and I've decided to improve on that, here are my results:

old one:

Well anyways, just gimmie feedback and/or rate it.

 

[FattBoy008]

I like the ClanK-Ollage text, and your signature, it will look nice if you add some shine to the logo, Nice Job.

 

[Curt]

Looks nice. I think the cursive Clank is too small though, hard to read.

 

[Clank]

It was hand-drawn w/ a stylus, which may explain why it is hard to read. I'll practice tonight before I sleep, thanks for the feedback.

 

[X_Deity_X]

i actually like it keep the black one and make the cursive like how you have it on the blue one and give it some shine

 

[hauntedishacked]

The logo is kinda choppy, logo's need to be clean and need to look professional according to the subject

 

[Clank]

What part of it is choppy? If you meant the signature, then get over it. Its a signature.

 

[Antman]

Ah, looks nice

 

[hauntedishacked]

What part of it is choppy? If you meant the signature, then get over it. Its a signature.

The blue logo, the text on the side.

 

[Clank]

Thats hand-drawn, signatures are...well...choppy.

 

[rorofo]

pretty cool!!!!!!!

 

[Clank]

Great feedback, that man.

Why on earth did you copy codies sig?

 

[hauntedishacked]

Thats hand-drawn, signatures are...well...choppy.

Good pentooling works wonders, although that might require abit of skill and practice.

 

[Dustein]

I like your original one better.

Just one question: Do you guys see them as transparent?

It is either my computer, or Imageshack fuxing up. =(