New grunge sig

look in my signature area.
some actual decent gfx artist CnC would be nice

 

Of course, first, there is no real 'point of focus.' You have text, and a 'logo,' but they are oddly margined. Your depth is highly lacking, and your grunge was put to waste. The right-to-left gradient you used should have been left-to-right, so that the darkness of the right side balanced out the darkness of the logo. The way you have it setup now gives your work a 'heavy' feeling to it's left side, and usually puts people off. Not only with these lighting issues, but also, again, in margin, your text and 'logo' are set too high. Consider centering them on the margin in height. Next, work with the conformity of the border in your 'logo' by giving it a hint of random. Not so much that the whole border is grunge again, but just a bit so that it looks like the border on one corner has a bit of interesting detail.

 

After reading that I feel like I need to go make something lmao. Prett nice but hes right about all of it, especially the left to right part.. would look a ton better I think.

 

Thanks for the feedback, Vision Ex. I'll get to work and post an update soon