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Djanaz

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Feel free to use it but the resolution might not be an usual one since my screen resolution is so strange.
And yeah please rate it.
Before you start stating that i have stole it all I have to say is that I'm also known as Koddo :)
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I don't like it at all to be honest,,

- Colors are not great,, way to much different colors and none of them go together
- Too much C4D,, making the entire piece to chaotic
- Composition is way off,, use rule of third for this
- Those scan lines on top of the whole piece is VERY ugly,, remove that
- No depth
- No flow
- And those C4D on low opacity,, that looks weird

It looks like you just placed LOTS of C4D on top of each other without even thinking about what looks good or matches together..
My advice would be to really think about things when making a piece

- Do the colors match
- Do the Effects i used really match together
- When i first look at it,, where do i look first (whats my focal point)
- Look at it from a distance,, you can notice other things that you did not see
- Try mirror it horizontally or vertically,, this usually helps me instantly to see what is wrong with it

Can't really find anything good about it,, sorry
 
Too much going on for my liking, but its purely preference
 
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