need opinions on my rapping?

[billybobdead]

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rwWeMDoBY1I&feature=plcp[/YOUTUBE]

if the video doesnt work heres the direct link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rwWeMDoBY1I&feature=plcp

well we made this in about 7 minutes, the longest part was waiting for it to upload. anyways, could i get some positive or negative feedback on this? im the main guy rapping

 

[Dimethyl]

This is a joke right? You aren't rapping at all. You're just talking. Not funny either.

 

[billybobdead]

This is a joke right? You aren't rapping at all. You're just talking. Not funny either.

i was rapping?

 

[Dimethyl]

i was rapping?

Not really. You were whispering most of the time. I really doubt you're serious considering it's about rape and the 2nd guy kept laughing lol. If you are though, then you should definitely quit now.

 

[Klockeet]

Lmfao

 

[kmjt]

Get a new mic, seems like you are rapping into a crappy one.

 

[k0nfig]

I find it hard to masturbate too..

 

[billybobdead]

um ya...i was using a turtle beach headset haha. and an old one at that.
but in all honesty, we have written a runescape rap, and were going over to my friends house this weekend to record it. he has all kinds of recording goodies, and i think were gonna do it to this same track. the only reason that this happened is because we started recording, it sounded like crap, and i just freestyle...talked

 

[Rajee]

need opinions on my rapping?

stop doing it

 

[billybobdead]

i still feel like this is a solid song

 

[mill3n]

um ya...i was using a turtle beach headset haha. and an old one at that.
but in all honesty, we have written a runescape rap, and were going over to my friends house this weekend to record it. he has all kinds of recording goodies, and i think were gonna do it to this same track. the only reason that this happened is because we started recording, it sounded like crap, and i just freestyle...talked

Don't make raps about RuneScape... You don't want to make rap worse than it is already.

 

[Emperor Nero]

There is nothing solid about this video... I don't listen to much rap, but I do know decent rap when I hear it and this was a joke.

 

[ForexBank]

Well.. You got a nice voice, Get a good mic and put some time into the lyrics. I would love to listen to you again if you try to get better.

 

[billybobdead]

All Yall Niggas Just Wait, Im Bout To Drop The Runescape Rap Dis Weekend. Yall Gon Be Amaz3d

 

[BatonG]

Lol you gotta effing kiddin with me. This is worse than drake. Wow. This is not even rapping it is more talking phone-sex with some random chick.

 

[billybobdead]

Lol you gotta effing kiddin with me. This is worse than drake. Wow. This is not even rapping it is more talking phone-sex with some random chick.

ya, that was the point. this is the kinda song you make love too, for hours at a time

 

[Zack W]

If you enjoy rapping keep doing it, but rememeber it does not sound the best. I support you if you love what you do.

 

['DickButt]

lawl.....

 

[kill dank]

This is retarded. Get the mic out of your mouth, first of all. Rap sucks, and so does whatever this is. It's not funny.

 

[mathpower10]

This is retarded. Get the mic out of your mouth, first of all. Rap sucks, and so does whatever this is. It's not funny.

Yeah, less whispering