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Camel Facts​

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Amazingly enough many animals and mammals to this date are still used for certain necessities and jobs. Like the camel, many people depend on this creature for its skills and incredible self-sufficient abilities. Not many camel-like creatures in this world that can sustain the heat and duration of long labor without rest and water; which makes the camel unique in many ways. With all this positives there has to be some negatives right? Well of course there is they can be troublesome at times to humans when not treated or cared for properly.
Camels are hardy and amazingly self-sufficient. For example, they can carry lumps of fat in their humps, which provide them with food for days; helping them go on for a long period of time without food. They can eat anything from hay to thorny twigs, even tent material if they had to. Another great attribute the Camels have are, the thick leather pads on their legs that act like kneepads on hot sand. Camels are known for the humps on their backs; many people think the humps on their back contain the water, which they save but that is not true. They actually don’t sweat much, so they retain much of the water in their bodies. In addition, Camels can go for weeks, even months, without water if they have to, however on hot days they can consume large quantities of water (when it’s available).

People living in the deserts depend on camels to help them survive. For instance, they can easily walk on soft sand where trucks would get stuck. Camels are also capable of carrying heavy loads (up to 330 lbs.) to places that have no roads; however trucks may be able to carry heavy amounts they are of no use in the desert. People like the fact that camels are very strong and can do a variety of things, one being that they can pull plows in hard, dry soil and again no truck can compare to a camel. Another reason why camels are a great asset to people that live in the desert is that they can give milk that is good for drinking or making cheese; while providing wool that can be made into clothes for humans.

However, camels can be troublesome at times to people. In the first place, camels stand six to seven feet tall, in addition to the fact they stand like the twin towers they also kick when they don’t feel like working or when their upset. When upset they may sometimes spit at people or even turn around and try to bite a human rider. It is not the mammal’s fault they do not have the stamina to work hard for more than six months in a year, it is only a camel not a rig; also when they don’t feel like carrying heavy loads they may groan, wail, or refuse to stand up.
Overall these creatures are amazing at what they do and are just plainly incredible. Even though the camel has plenty of negatives its positives by far outweigh the con’s. If it wasn’t for the camel’s who knows what people in the desert would be surviving off of, or using for transportation. The camel is a wonderful gift that G-D gave to this earth and of course to those in the desert as well.


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