Need feedback on my signature!

[static]

Hello everyone, static here. I just created this new signature it took me a good 4 hours, so I really want some feedback on it. I know it's not the best, but it's as good as I can do right now, next time what can I improve on? what should I change? Should I use a different colour scheme? etc. Thank you very much!

EDIT: NEW AND IMPROVED VERSION FOUND BELOW! Need feedback for this as well!

~Static


Signature found below...

 

[Nerfed]

Too small but it looks cool man.

 

Clean it up, there are alot of little smudges that need to be erased.

 

[static]

Too small but it looks cool man.

Okay let me make the text bigger, Thank you! One problem is that when I render it to picture viewer to save it as a PNG it's too big...

Clean it up, there are alot of little smudges that need to be erased.

Yes I know what you mean, i'll try clean up the edges, they are a bit rough

 

[The Weeknd]

The word static and blue just makes sense to me, I don't know why.

Not too bad for a start, and like Moonglare has mentioned, I can see the sides are a bit smudged. Clean that up, make the font a bit bigger, and you're good to go!

 

[static]

new signature, need feedback on this one too please

 

Needs work with the blending. In other words try making the stocks not look like they were just cut and pasted from other places onto your signature. Make the whole thing "flow".

 

[MediaMadDL]

I Agree with moonglase, also on the first two letters try to smudge the ice or use the clonestamp tool too clean it up abit, some of it looks like its not connected to the letter: but good job more experience you have the more you'll get better.

 

[static]

Needs work with the blending. In other words try making the stocks not look like they were just cut and pasted from other places onto your signature. Make the whole thing "flow".

Hmmm i'll try my best... This has got me thinking, thanks for the input

I Agree with moonglase, also on the first two letters try to smudge the ice or use the clonestamp tool too clean it up abit, some of it looks like its not connected to the letter: but good job more experience you have the more you'll get better.

I have something against smudging tools, they make it hard to read, I don't know what the clone stamp tool is, but i'll experiment around a bit, and yes I know some is not connected to the letter going to work on that, Thank you, still in the beginning stages though. Thanks for the input!

 

[static]

fixed it up a bit, More feedback please <3

 

[xDePloY]

I wouldn't put the C4D angle to that high as it looks weird >_> Blending needs alot of work and with the ice stuck under the S and T; The edging doesn't really match. Its alot too bright for my taste :3