Focus on what you think is right rather then trying to please other people with your lyrics.
I wasn't going to reply with my honest opinion to your other post, but since you persist with calling me fake, I will.
I agree with the guy who said its terrible.
Nobody called it terrible, except you. Tezlin said he didn't even listen to it, he's an old friend here who was joking around with me, not that you read the post.
You have no flow, no power in your voice, no heart in what your saying,
Okay, that's your opinion. Fair enough.
the stuff you write didn't make sense.
I seriously think you're fucking with me. It makes perfect sense to a normal, literate person. What part doesn't make sense?
As a tip i'd say quit writing about all the stuff you want people to think your about. Write about somthing in your life that you've actually experienced so you can soulfully rap about it, not just be another sterotype.
I can honestly say I have never heard this type of rap hit mainstream radio. I may not be in Syria, but they are my people, and I felt like I had to at least write something about it. This is not the first song I've written, and it certainly won't be my last. Your honestly the first person to tell me I'm bad, which is fine by me as long as it's your opinion, but to accuse me of being fake, not once, but twice really pisses me off. I am not trying to please other people, I couldn't really give two fucks. If I was that hell-bent on pleasing people, I'd write a song about getting bitches, hopping in clubs, that fake shit they play on the radio. I wouldn't be writing about my homeland, I've never once asked for sympathy in anything I've written, never once bragged, I write about the real shit, and if you can't feel or "Understand" my lyrics, then I know at least half a dozen people who can, and I haven't shown anybody bar a couple of really close friends and Sythe.
I don't mean to be rude, but I felt like I at least had to defend myself.
