Need Advice! Lighting ; A Tag

[GFX | Justin]

Trying to use multiple light sources :\ Kinda inspired by Alt/TR1

So any advice on how I could improve, not only on lighting, but anything else, is greatly appreciated :3

Original; http://lookbook.nu/files/looks/large/844626_Untitled-2.6.jpg?1286473611

 

[Haunted]

It seems your to focused on lighting, lighting if done correctly is simple and doesn't take up a whole tag. The effects need to be in place and lighting needs to complement those effects creating a realistic feel.
Not the other way around.

On other notes:
Border isn't working, I prefer tags without a border.
Your tag's look oversharpenend try to avoid this.
You seem to have a concept of depth, try to blur bits which are further a bit more than bits which seem to be closer to create a better effect.

 

[GFX | Justin]

Ok, thanks much