GFX | Justin Guru Joined Jun 19, 2010 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 1,729 Location Somewhere in the Cosmos.. Feb 16, 2011 #1 Would like some advice on how to improve. Thanks.
Spraynwipe How soon is now? Joined May 15, 2010 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 2,649 Location Australia Feb 17, 2011 #2 Liking this one, although I think the diagonal lines don't fit with the c4d's in the foreground. Also needs some other colours. Nice entry
Liking this one, although I think the diagonal lines don't fit with the c4d's in the foreground. Also needs some other colours. Nice entry
Tylergozzelin Member Joined Feb 8, 2011 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 66 Feb 17, 2011 #3 i disagree on diag lines, but yes more color
GFX | Justin Guru Joined Jun 19, 2010 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 1,729 Location Somewhere in the Cosmos.. Feb 17, 2011 #4 The stock was black and white :\ But I liked it, so I just went with it Thanks for the advice. I kinda threw the lines in last minute when I saw I didn't have much lighting other than the spheres.
The stock was black and white :\ But I liked it, so I just went with it Thanks for the advice. I kinda threw the lines in last minute when I saw I didn't have much lighting other than the spheres.
The one and only. Joined Jun 8, 2006 Sythe Gold 714 Messages 1,666 Feb 18, 2011 #5 Looks good, but a bit plain could use more color as stated above. Good job.
SkillzMania Member Joined Feb 26, 2011 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 49 Age 37 Location England, UK Feb 27, 2011 #6 Agreed with everything above! More colour!
W WhitePassion Forum Addict Joined Nov 1, 2010 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 338 Mar 1, 2011 #7 Two light sources distracts from the render :X