You need to blend the render more. And don't tell people not to help you, it makes you sound like even more of a nub because you aren't willing to learn what we are saying will help you.
OFF-TOPIC: That picture was from my other post I posted before you stole it
But anyway it's good and I like it but I was just wondering is the name supppose to be tilted a little bit? I think it might look better straight across.