My Poem Rate or Hate

[Inventor]

Not a Ska man, punk, emo, alt, death metal.... just to name a few...

But the poem (what i wrote it for) is about dreams that fade and the dreams you keep. Sometimes you use them as a cruch of sorts and other times you use them to hold yourelf up when your down....

What does that have to do with an abyss? That's the problem. Emo poems are a waste of time. Idk what kind of punk you listen to but it has to be alt punk aka emo.

I get a hard core fall out boy/all time low vibe from this poem and I'm not feelin it.

Listen to some ska,
Ethan

 

[deadzone]

It's alright I guess, Kinda long for a poem beings there isn't really a story to it (only poems with a story to them are usually that long but there usually a bit longer than that) but not bad I suppose. If you get the chance look at my lyrics page (in my sig) and tell me what you think beings you got the idea on poems.

 

[Y0u_G0t_Pwn3d]

Abyss means nothing with emos, its a word meaning endless pit, hole or otherwise....