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Billyy

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I think it's my best.

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Give me some good feedback.
 
Its okay, the only bad pointers would be the DNA strands or w/e to the left and right of his face, they dont blend to well, make them larger?
I think you should replace the trashco font, its used to widely, but the arial? font looks good.
 
The words 'The Experience' are in Sylfaen. I was trying to get the actual 'Hendrix' font, but the 'H' in 'Hendrix' didn't come out the way I wanted it to. Those aren't DNA strands, they are buttons taken from the lower part of his jacket, on the original stock image.
 
I think it looks good overall, only thing I can think of that would make it look better is if hendrix kinda stuck out more, know what I'm sayin?
EDIT: the guy, not text.
 
That font does not go at all with that style, it is hardly ledgible. The little "buttons" or whatever on the side just look randomly placed.
 
Looks good, like someone else had said, buttons are distracting.
 
Your colors don't exactly work well together, the purple shade on hendrix' face, the reds used in the background and the white glow used on your text.... they just don't work together. Your font choice is a bit off for what kind of sig you've made, and the soft brushing to the bottom right looks like what you've tried to make the light source, but it doesn't match your stock photo.

'twas a good attempt though.
 
Thats Ok But Not The Best Ive Seen
 
It's good, but like I said, the nose, is too bright, and the Hendrix font is kind of random. I really like the color choice though, and the buttons in the background. (yeah, it's your best so far :D)

It's OK...
Thats Ok But Not The Best Ive Seen


You and you are idiots imo. "It's OK"??? How is that telling him what he did right and what he did wrong.. If it's not the best you've seen, tell him what he did wrong.. LRN2READANNOUNCEMENTS
 
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