I've used that exact render
Get rid of the random clipping mask and the text and it's an alright tag.
Right now it looks like a bunch of random effects and a render :s. That border along with the blue c4d(?) on the right ruins the flow mate.
I like the effect on the bottom left part of the render GJ on that
Use graident maps!!! They help grasp the color scheme.
Also you need a light source and lighting.
KIU